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Quite well overall, but brace yourself for a slew of small shrapnel. First, the figure is not very proportionate, but it's anime-style, so I won't dwell on that. The wings are quite good, by themselves - not real bird, but fantasy wings - but their attachment doesn't look consistent, the left wing is set much lower than the right one. The gray color of armor lapses into neutrality in many places, I don't think that is a desirable effect. I can also see that you nearly stopped shy of the left edge - it would be better either to extend the canvas to give the figure more free space, or to cut that knife off completely. Forcing it to just touch the edge does not help the composition at all, and looks rather awkward - it sits right across the eye path. The red kilt - how-you-call-it - is a nice touch to balance off the bluish bulk of the picture and communicates nicely with the red runes on the swords, a correct decision; but there are spots where it's not defined enough. Especially I think it should be darker and more saturated at the bottom, in the shadows. And there is clearly discernible High Pass effect in the background, but at least it's not a photograph.

Admittedly, it's really all small gripes, overall it's not bad at all. Keep working!

P.S. Good design of the armor. Really.

looks awesome!

Agree about the composition--it's seriously cramped. Which is s shame because the character's pose have a lot of movement going on there, but he doesn't seem to be *able* to move in this picture! That aside the designs are excellent, I love the cool blue used for the background too.

I love your colors... and the movement, though I do agree it seems a little cramped but you could easily remedy that. Give that bird room to fly and this piece could really "take off" ;0) +6

Almost perfect.I can agree with the colors and composition, its good. I only dont like the difference betwen uper part and lower part of pic. Upper have more contrast colors etc, lower not. Anyway good pic +7

nice

Lookin' great! My first reaction though was that I wish there were more color reflected in his armor.
I do dig the detail work on him though. Good overall color choices too.

THe blades are mad!

This one seems a bit unpolished, but I love the design and the dynamics of this peice. There's a lot going on, and a lot of the lines bring movement to it.

thank u all for such a good advices~~there are so many things I have to learn,and I will keep going~~